Open Poetry #23 |
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Just One Hour |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Just One Hour Yes, yes my love. You possess the stuff that sweet dreams are made of. I would do everything in my power to hold you to kiss you for just one hour. And when that hour is done I will not hesitate to request another one hon. JamesLee December04 2002 |
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cherrylips Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 51UK |
This is funny I like it. Only one comment would be to perhaps alter the layout. I feel if it was sepearted slighlty more it would have a bteer effect. PLease dont take offence just a suggestion and you are by far a better poet than I. Enjoyed, dx |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is simple in it's form.... yet what we all would want... another, and another for a lifetime. Well, least I would, smiling here... Thank you, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I think you both would want more than one hour James. ![]() Good write! ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice James , simple but the emotion is expressed. An hour may not be long enough once you have felt each others souls you want eternity. ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, One hour leads to another, enjoyed. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
so true.... I use to always think of the song "We've got tonight ..who needs tomorrow"? Until tomorrow that is.... when you would need the night all over again ![]() So are you totally confused now? I enjoyed the read muchly ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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