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Cassie
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0 posted 2002-12-03 10:51 AM


Sometimes I think that your too good to be true
If you only knew the love inside that I have for you

You are a dream come true
I am so thankful that God showed me to you


You are everything I wanted
Let us never to go undaunted

A love so true and right
Our love shines bright

Hold me tight and take delight
To watch our life take flight

© Copyright 2002 Cassie - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-12-03 01:12 PM


This is so sweet in sincerity that it IS a delight.
zenny
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2 posted 2002-12-03 01:16 PM


a true delight to read this

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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3 posted 2002-12-03 01:25 PM




(sigh) Oh Cassie, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I wish for true loves beauty to always shine in your heart and fill you with this delight forever! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! you have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cassie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
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4 posted 2002-12-03 01:37 PM


I hear a soft heart beat in your song. Thank you.

Cassie
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5 posted 2002-12-04 10:33 AM


Thank you all for your wonderful feedback.  
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