Open Poetry #23 |
My Sweetheart Kisses |
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
How I cherish your sweetness, leaning against me, your support, when you come in from out there, seeking me, and I caress your depth. How I love that five o'clock shadow and, adore untying your tie of stress, by ~just so~ touches up your back, and, snuggles and wet kisses up your chest. My love, I love your need of me, and I respect your tender heart, uncovered. Carefully, I adjust the pressure of us, savoring the quiver of your essence And, you adjust my level of joy, for I've given all to you from my greater being, a gift for both of us, and yet, the greatest gift we've been given, is our compatibility. And, I thank you darling, for telling me, how happy you are, for in your trust, your joy, your comfort your complete, you sate my yearning of giving and loving. I am satisfied, each day filling back up, for when you come in from out there, seeking me.... I'll be waiting with my sweetheart kisses, and an understanding of your needs. . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-04-2002 05:33 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, and may your waiting heart beat with the satisfaction of sweet love and happiness forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
The sincerity and sweet essence of this real work of art really say alot about you and your deep love and emotions, you compassion and true care. I just love it! I'm smiling now, gonna read it again Keep it up Always, GG -And so it was that time stood still- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, this is so beautiful. It has so many emotions and passion in it. It's very sensual. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, friend. By the way, I like the style you wrote this in, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Beautifully written, I can feel the love you speak of, Very nice expression of a connection shared between two lovers. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I was touched by the thought that you express his being out there and him coming home to you. And everything else was expressed fine too. Thank you. etoodog |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a wonderful tribute! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is a poem of true love, and i hope the recipient of these beutiful words is aware of these feelings. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Soft and romantic in its beauty--enjoyed! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Noah, Thanks for your reply. You are always so sweet. GG, So glad you enjoyed. And thanks for all the compliments, but I believe that is what true love is..smiling here.... Ethel, Thanks. I am not satisfied in how it typed out. But am glad that didn't stop you from enjoying it... Whiskey, Yes, it is quite a connection between two who really love one another...glad you enjoyed. Robert, Glad you liked the idea of a haven for him.....I do to! Dixie, Thank you. James, Thanks for the very nice. Inkedgoddess, Yes, it is a depiction of true love, I think, too. Thanks for reading. Sandpiper, glad you enjoyed. Thanks to all of you for reading and replying... Warmest regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
My oh my oh my! What a wonderful, loving and sensual poem. This is definitely a keeper. Huggles, Marti |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pat And the greatest of these is compatibility, without which true love sometimes finds fault in the other. Loved this uplifting beautiful love poem. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness girlfriend, you just keep on out-doing yourself! You are growing in leaps and bounds as a poetess!--and other ways as well, I'm sure! Love does great things! ~ warm hugs for a very warm heart Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pat, this is perfect....I know for a fact that I could not have written it any better in a million tries...nicely done girl!! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Marti, thank you so much for taking the time to read and reply, it means a lot to me. Am glad you like it and ~you~ think it's a keeper...smiling here.. Martie, I so agree with you about the compatibility, one of a couple important facets of a love relationship. I am pleased you found it uplifting. Linda, my dear friend, I keep trying to write in new ways. Didn't mean this one to be quite this sensual. But, obviously it worked okay. I still want to tackle characters, but, that's much more time consuming and difficult, but I wanna!!! I've had lots of help, now just have to try it. Thank you for the note about my growth as a poetess; I often feel unsure of myself in that regard, so it means much that you took the time to read and reply. Barry, Your reply caused me to burst out in tears...I would argue with you all day about your comment. But, you certainly made me feel good. What a compliment. That is so encouraging, I appreciate you taking the time and effort to reply. I noticed there were not many love poems written from a woman's point of view, so thought I'd see if I could. I did...though I think it needs some refining and re-typed, but I'll leave as is for now.....smiling here..and thanking you from the bottom of my heart. I just want to thank all of you again for reading, replying and your support. Means so much. Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-04-2002 05:47 PM).] |
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