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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Departing across the deep blue sea waving at you 'til you're gone from me leaning over the railing for one last glimpse holding you close always. Seeking secret wanton wishes buried treasures, in stark contrast a hush of lust, misguided trust unbridled and unrestrained. Leaving behind a trail of warm air of what once was in passing, past chilled by my foolish desire. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey Lori, There's not much I've found about you that is foolish! Least of all this write. I truly hope your desires are fulfilled. You certainly that and more. Bless you dear girl. I love seeing you here. Peace.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We've all played the fool at one time or another...so I don't necessarily feel that I'm alone on this~ Thank you kindly for your blessings and especially for believing in me Larry~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
BluesSerenade~ Touching write of passing love. I hope your ship has smooth sailing forever...Paul |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
You are right, this could describe any of us at one time or another--enjoyed! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
foolish desire? Is it foolish to dream and wish for things we think missing on our life? you write it well, as usual... but I believe a person only achieves by taking chances... Enjoyed my friend... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade Nothing wrong with a little wishing, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Lori, this is sooooooo beautifully sad, sweet friend, may love never depart from your harbor and may it always ebb right in you! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Hey girl! finally found you here..and just love this write of yours. Telling the story of stories with that unique charm of yours. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Beautiful poem, it tells quite a story. WinterWren |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori, I definately have been down this road that you speak of so well in this wonderful write. (I most definately have had the same foolish desires.) Hugs to you for writing this sweetie, and it is good to see your words again, I have missed them! HUGS |
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Crashoverride New Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 5Texas |
This is one of the first posts I have read as being a new member of net poets. I just wanted to say that i really liked your poem. Always friend, Crash Ashes to ashes dust to dust life is short so party we must! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, I really love this poem, as I do all your poetry. I've missed you, here. Are you doing okay? I hope so. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Blues...it's very good to see you posting again. Sounds like life has been a bit rough for you. Tears just go along with the love sometimes. Wishing you well. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Down a path, winding so...with a sign ahead. Pointing in directions unknown, twirled by the wind... Where might this beacon to my future stop? Will it point the right way? Should I trust the whispered winds, or should I simply let my heart guide? Gosh, haven't we all done this...some more than others...but most assuredly ALL of us have... Nicely done Lori...excellent and so honest.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
a hush of lust, misguided trust Hmmmm....I think I have experienced this...as many of us have. Life's lessons are sometimes harsh. Enjoyed this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lori~This is not foolish... just a normal desire. Enjoyed the read. ~Hugs sweetie~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well, golly gee, I'm overwhelmed and don't quite know what to say. Thank you all for comforting me with your words of friendship. Yes, life is not always kind, the road is long and a bit rough to be sure, and it isn't always smooth sailing on the seas. In the midst of my pity party I've been known to become angry and overwhelmed by my own sadness. But alas it is a futile attempt that serves no purpose and only perpetuates that which I cannot change. But what I regret most is that I alienate myself and for that I am sorry~ I really can't thank you enough, your kind words mean so much and move me in ways I can't completely convey~~~ I hope that you know~ Hugs all around and around~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
where have you been.......been missing you and your thoughts.. hugss M Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving |
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