Open Poetry #23 |
You just dont understand |
quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
See the things that I do for you is not just for fun I try to do it as right as possible but you keep me on the run I’m doing my best not to get you mad Because I could be the bestest boyfriend you ever had I’m trying to get to you but things never work out right I try hard but things alwayz resort into a fight You don’t understand what I’m going through to get to you I don’t really don’t know what I’m going to do The things I do are suppose to work things out but it wont You know you do some of the things and don’t say you don’t Because there is so many things I can do and then I’ll just fall Making your sweet voice lift me up with a simple phone call Will make me feel like a new me that can do so many things On top of that I could also buy you a diamond ring But you still don’t understand what’s going on Because you still do the same things wrong And I can’t just sit here and take it no more Even though you’re the girl I do adore Makes me cry even more No matter what I do for you nothing will make it right Because all we do is sit here and fight So nothing will ever be right for the both of us Because we cant go through with all this fuss I’ll just sit here and think about what’s going to happen… |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Say goodbye and good luck. As hard as it may seem, it's the only viable option. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love shouldn't hurt, altho' it often does. Perhaps by thinking more with one's head rather than just reacting to our emotions, we get a clearer picture of the situation. ~ Sending you lots of loving and healing energy Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Antonio, I could feel the hurt in you through this one. I hope it's not about the other girl you wrote about. If it is, maybe you should just find somone else, before you get more involved with her. Love isn't suppose to hurt, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
quik, love is the most beautiful thing on earth, but as the rest allready said: it isn't supposed to hurt. After love grew in your heart for this girl, u could only hope she'd return the love.. sadly in this case u'll have to let go, there will be others u'll love, and they will return the love u feel The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
There comes a point when you have done everything you possibly could to keep a relationship going, and if it still isn't working right after that, this is the point where you say goodbye. Good expressions in your poem. Keep it up! WinterWren |
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