Open Poetry #23 |
Whispering With Love (# 13 of verses) |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Whispering with love across the gulf's rolling waves to the peaceful shore [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-02-2002 10:29 PM).] |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Such a lovely and peaceful senryu! Thanks i needed that hugs Cher Poetry is: |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I really enjoyed the gentle movement to the music in this~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Tidal heart beatings Swoon like monsoons to lovers It's raining pearls! (smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, just like Mark you are becoming a master of the short form, yay, I just love the romance you conjure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cheryl, thank you. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Lori, thanks for reading. I'm glad that you heard music. Noah, Thanks. I sure do like writing them, too. It seems, though, I go from one extreme to the other with my writing.....these itty bitty ones or the LOOOOOOONG poems, like the last two that I wrote. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This delightful little poem contains 4 of my favorite words: whispering, love, waves, and peaceful. How could I not have enjoyed reading it! ~ May you forever hear Gary whispering words of love to you! Linda |
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quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
thanks so much and i like this poem too. Its nice to hear from people that like to help. thanks and hope to hear from you as well as your poems. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, thank you so much for your sweet reply. I'm really glad that you liked this one. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I felt like a surfer riding a beautiful wave. Thank you. etoodog |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Antonio, thank you for reading and replying to my poem. I appreciate it, and I'm glad that you liked my poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Robert, thanks a lot for reading and replying. I'm glad that you liked it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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