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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-12-04 03:18 PM


I'm watching Santa stumbling--
taking tumbles on his..ice?
laughing quite dementedly--
his blades don't make the slice.

Somebody get this man a sleigh!
And an elf to steer.
This Santa's had a bit too much
of that "Christmas cheer!"

Let Rudolph guide the way by nose--
a cautionary light.
Let's keep the season safe my friends--
please don't drink and drive.

*   *   *



(somewhat inspired by the tumbling Santa found here: /main/today.cgi?action=getdaily )



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-12-04 03:21 PM


A very important message that you bring us Karen, done in pure Serenity style.  Happy and safe holidays to you too gal!
Ethan Halo
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2 posted 2002-12-04 03:24 PM


needed a laugh this morning!
and it's a great psa.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-12-04 03:30 PM


Karen, this is so cute, but with a very important message.
I liked it.    
(We'll leave the drinking in the "lounges"...okay??  HaHa!!  

(by the way, reckon where Elan is, with it still being morning. It was
3:24PM when he posted, 2:24PM my time here)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-12-04 03:32 PM


Very timely piece of advice Karen...
done in a humorous way...
Thanks for this reminder.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-04 03:44 PM


An important message indeed Luscious

hugs dear one

Maree

doreen peri
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Virginia
6 posted 2002-12-04 03:59 PM


guess i'll have to stay home again this year
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2002-12-04 03:59 PM


Wonderful message here, Serenity! I really like the poem, too.
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-12-04 04:41 PM


a good message in good humor

*s
M

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