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7 Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 113Amherst, MA, USA |
you say my voice is like a bird dying on crack but still thinking people want to hear it SING well I will sing until my beak cracks my wings can no longer hold me up and my feathers flutter to the ground because all a dying bird has is its SONG no i will NOT wait three seconds! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
PO[crack]WER!!! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (12-02-2002 09:56 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This reminds me so much of Bobby Darin's "Bobwhite", sweet friend, always follow your heart and let your heart sing and your wings shall mend and the sparrows will all guide you with their symphonies of encouragement! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet 7, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Of course we want your song. Even your swan song...........particularly your swan song. Please sing. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
That's the best song a bird ever sang. I wish to thank you any way possible. etoodog |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
7 Without a song the day is never done, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I know there is a serious tune in here, but I had this image of a cracking high shrill note breaking a beak and I had to laugh. Please keep singing. All tunes are equal in this bird tree. (Really?) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
There is a level beneath the obvious here, a place where I cocked my head and then shook it in silent wonder. The first metaphor is well-done, the lower levels are astounding. I'm glad to have caught this thinker. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I felt this had a lot of "writing between the lines". I think it's good to keep singing no matter what. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Oh! Caught in the depths of your words--sing on! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sing... we'll listen, hoping to hear the notes underneath |
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