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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2002-12-05 03:01 AM

Then I shall listen
for the echo splash
of every drop
that nears
and feel the fall
of silent rain
that touches
to my lips

© 120502

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-12-05 10:23 AM

Krawdad

To listen and feel refines a sensitive soul and is not always easy to do in this noisy world. Enjoyed!

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2002-12-05 11:35 AM

You've illuminated simple details here that I've never even considered, and each re-read allowed me to feel those senses more keenly. Unique...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-12-05 11:47 AM

Krawdad
Would have liked the last word to be ears.
Enjoyed

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-12-05 11:57 AM

Krawda, I like the whispers that the rain tells me.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2002-12-05 02:13 PM

Thanks, Martie, glad you enjoyed.

Something new for you, Mark? Hey, I've succeeded! You are welcome.

Sey, you are spot on to the dilemma of this piece! My editor kept screaming ears,ears,ears! I had another message I guess. Always risky to kink the end like that.

g'sgirl, thanks, to another rain lover.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2002-12-05 10:11 PM

beautiful and "Something" for you

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2002-12-05 10:17 PM

Oh, I love this~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-12-05 10:29 PM

Wonderful...I shall keep this to savour again later.
~Hugs~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2002-12-05 10:31 PM

yeah...this one too has the quality that is hard to define, but pleasing... almost enigmatic in the ending...

I enjoyed

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2002-12-06 09:48 AM

deliciously peaceful thoughts, images

I love a walk in a gentle rain, thanks for taking me along.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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