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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-12-02 08:12 PM

You say that you love me
more than life itself
and we'll be together
come heaven or in hell.
But you come home late
pantyhose in your pocket
my waiting eyes open
you don't know I'm watchin.

chorus 1
where"s that forever lover
the angel of my dreams
I been lyin here awake
wishin you were next to me.
I got yesterdays and better days
roaming through my mind
while you're somewhere layin bare
what you promised me was mine

You tell morning stories
sober over coffee
about your workin late
on a special project
Well you're just foolin you
cause you ain't foolin me
I'm tellin you I saw you
hide things I shouldn't see.

Chorus 2
Where's that forever lover
the angel of my dreams
now I'm seein through you
and I don't like what I see
I got yesterdays and better days
roaming through my mind
but you been somewhere layin bare
what you promised me was mine

Bridge:
What happened to the times we spent
makin love by the fire
what happened to the nights we spent
filled with sweet desire.
What happened to the goals we knew
in the future we could see.
what happened to that other you
and the love you promised me.

Chorus 2 rep
Where's that forever lover
the angel of my dreams
now I'm seein through you
and I don't like what I see
I got yesterdays and better days
roaming through my mind
but you been somewhere layin bare
what you promised me was mine

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2002-12-02 08:33 PM

Hello Eric

This was so heartfelt and so wonderfully written......absolutely fabulous! I hope all is well with you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2002-12-02 08:58 PM

i here the music fella cool write

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2002-12-02 09:13 PM

Amazing! Did you put music to it? Are you going to try and publish it? It's a truly beautiful song!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-12-02 09:18 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Eric, this is such a beautifully heartfelt song,s weet friend, this is destined to be a Billboard charter, have you ever published your songs, they just have to get out there! (big hugggssssss) I hope all is well with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-12-02 09:55 PM

Eric, this is a really good song. It had many emotions in it.
Do you have music to it? I'll bet it sounds really
good with music.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-12-02 10:02 PM

Fantastic Eric!
Another great tune!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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