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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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So much commotion surrounded your passing It was like everything fell apart Secrets coming out from within People changing future Shock widespread across faces At the news that forthcame Secrets overhanging your death Forgotten greif ran deep in my heart Even in your passing he held the attention I hate him for that More so than for the bad things Unknown to me untill that day I loved him He once meant the world to me I cried the day he died Like loosing a father A father that lied to me He hurt you, cheated you Used love to decieve the people you cared for Your heart so big Never too many of us for you to love I am glad you never knew He was your world We would never have taken that from you I hope in your passing you have found peace You deserve to rest I know you are watching Keeping us all safe Nan I love you always [This message has been edited by whiskey (12-02-2002 07:00 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your heart so big Never too many of us for you to love I am glad you never knew He was your world We would never have taken that from you I hope in your passing you have found peace You deserve to rest I know you are watching Keeping us all safe Nan I love you always ============================== obvioulsy a deeply personal piece... also a touching express to someone special. we find healing in the release of the words. So good to see you back in the blue pages again poetess whiskey...your words touched me this morning..thank you for that. jm |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Awwwww, I can feel so much pain in this poem - dear sweet poet; it is in your heart, your memories and your dreams that those you love will live on . Never stop caring or writing . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
whiskey A surrender of tender, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, my heart goes out to you and your loss, sweet friend, know Nan will always love you so much and guide you with light as I send many angel hugs your way! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
THis is such a hearfelt piece....I am truely sorry for your pain. I hope writing cleanses your soul and makes it smile again. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, I can feel the pain through this poem. You really wrote it well. If this is about you, I hope that the heartache you feel will soon be better. I know from experience, that writing does help. Thank you for sharing your poetry and I hope to read more of your work.  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-02-2002 04:27 PM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very sad and touching poem. Nicely penned. Maree  |
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