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Waiting |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Your eyes are closed; I watch you rest. I treasure you whom I loved best. I wonder that our lives were such We gave the other so very much. You were my heart, my very soul You made our home you were my whole. You turn in sleep with a touch of smile Upon your lips and all the while I gaze at you, so lovely still; and wish you love, I always will. The one that took me from you, love I have no knowing from here, above. Your image fades, they say it does Something about time and death because We cannot always see our dears for too much pain and too many tears. But when the mist is clear for me I send my love evermore to thee. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...ghostly. Well done. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) And you always send such graceful love across these pages, sweet friend, I wish nothing but true happiness to always fill your heart and romance to croon to you! (big huggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-01-2002 06:31 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ken, this is so exquisitely beautiful... sad and haunting...yet beautiful. Your words of love and devotion flow onto the page. Another keeper from you my dear friend. ~Special hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hauntingly lovely. A love like this never dies--its form may change, but it will endure the test of time and transcend across all space. This you have so wonderfully portrayed through your eloquent and moving words. Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ken, I love the way that you wrote this in the person of the already deceased. It really was as if a spirit was writing it. There were some Biblical truths in it, too (no tears in Heaven). It was beautiful, but hauntingly so. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
For Mark and Noah: Thank you for your kind praise. For E, EA and GG, thank you for your thoughtful words. Sometimes I look for the imagery that Nancy has mastered, but feel best with simple words. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well said, and felt all over |
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