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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2002-11-30 07:02 PM



Blue’s Tattoos

the worst part
of a bruise
is within
when the color
comes back
it is still
under your skin

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-30 07:05 PM






(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very true, sweet friend, that is why you shan't itch those mosquito bites or they will only grow with the radiation you give them! (sigh) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-30 07:41 PM




I’ve a tattoo or two
Some red and some blue
Dye and needle I’d use
Not a fist to bruise
With time your new tattoo
Will fade from view
But will the violence used?

Dirk

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3 posted 2002-12-01 10:32 AM


very true.....

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4 posted 2002-12-01 09:21 PM


A short powerful write, Helen.
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5 posted 2002-12-01 09:26 PM


i was thinking something when i first saw this title, but reading the post... it's gone away. life lingers, and so do the pains... especially the ones no one can see.
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6 posted 2002-12-01 09:41 PM


Yes, I liked this.

True

Ed

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7 posted 2002-12-01 10:41 PM


Helen, this is so true.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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8 posted 2002-12-20 05:04 AM


yeah, you know I know
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