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Alienated
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Alienated |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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Alienated Like society can’t cope Hated Discriminated And for nothing I never broke the law Hiding myself away To stop the pressure Eating at me Cut from every angle Its like I’m a demon Waiting to attack Why would I attack the innocent? When I’m innocent myself Disaffection From even my family Fractured faith Can’t believe if it’s this harsh Smashed head on Into this brick wall of insanity. Rosie Mitchell |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rm711 Good bramble of ramble, enjoyed. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
that was very dramatic. A lot of people really do feel like this (I'm guessing that you do not.) You brought me back down to earth for a while Never be normal! |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
At times yeh i really do feel like that Its bad |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Rosie, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, no one deserves to be denied like this and I send many angel hugs of comfort your way! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I hope soon everything brightens up for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rosie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rosie, this is a well-written poem, but sad. I was hoping that it wasn't the way that you feel personally, but according to your respose above, you do feel this way sometimes. I'm very sorry for that and hope that things will soon get better for you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Rosie, hope you've got a crash helmet on! Hope you can get past this without stitches.  Hang in there. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You caught my attention with the title...good post. Welcome, I did not see your first writes...but will look you up now. The things that make no sense, and shake us to our core are often put there to strengthen us for important reasons. Hang in there. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I heard this scream. I say "screw 'em if they don't like it" Be yourself, that's all, that's enough. |
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