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A new day |
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cherrylips Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 51UK |
Sun rises Birds sing Open eyes Get up Hello Goodbye Shut eyes Go to sleep Clouds above Night falls |
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cherrylips Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 51UK |
This is not very good it was a spontaneous effort. New style in need of inspiration. lost all of my own thanx cherrylips. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...it's what's between the lines that counts... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi, cherrylips.......  I can't remember if I welcomed you or not, so I'll do it again. I do hope that you'll like your stay here at Passions In Poetry, and I hope that you will soon be calling it your "home", like we do here. I think you will find the people here very friendly and caring. I hope that you will feel very welcome here. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You covered a lot of territory in just 19 words! I suppose it is up to the reader to fill in the blanks.................. .......................... ........................... ............................. ............................... ....there I just did, and I'm exhausted! teehee! Cute write! Earth Angel [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-01-2002 05:46 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosah, you covered all the simple beauties from dawn to dusk so well, sweet friend, I love it, you have incredible talent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Wow, I can't believe I almost missed this. This was so much fun reading. I'm impressed with how the poem breaks into silence and out of silence. Thank you. etoodog |
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