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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-11-30 03:21 PM


Aloha Sunday


tradewinds journey fair
morning doves cry out love song
leopard clouds kiss blue


Steeples reach in praise
gatherers meet with a kiss
heavenly choirs singing


shadows hide at noon
sunbathers sizzle to brown
dancing azure waves


hammock on lanai
mango tango sherbet ice
slack key melodies


ominous gray clouds
packing suitcase comes to town
rainmakers showdown


musky smells of earth
colorful smile of rainbow
flowers weep for joy


shadows flirting glance
Honolulu city lights
ravishing beauty

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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1 posted 2002-11-30 03:27 PM




I love them all, but the
one with:

"flowers weep for joy"

is my favorite.

Hugs and warm regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
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2 posted 2002-11-30 03:36 PM


hey, regards, I like that one, too! And I like the "packing suitcase comes to town" , especially, as well!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-30 06:52 PM




(smiles) Oh Cheryl, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have been to Honolulu and the Polynesian Cultural Center and Turtle Bay and it is soooooooo gorgeous at both daytime and night! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I could use mango tango now, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-11-30 07:10 PM


Cheryl, this is so beautiful. I've never been to Hawaii,
but it certainly sounds like I'd like it there. I've heard
it's a beautiful place.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
5 posted 2002-11-30 10:24 PM


I wish I could gather up all of you and fly you here for a poet party Thanks for reading and you always kind remarks
warm hugs to all ,
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2002-12-01 12:15 PM


Cher, I have always wanted to visit Hawaii but have always ended up going elsewhere! But until I get to your tropical paradise, I appreciate you bringing it to me!

I truly enjoyed "the visit"! Thanx!

~ warm hugs

Linda

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2002-12-02 06:50 PM


Fabulous Cher...James
Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21
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PA/USA
8 posted 2002-12-02 07:27 PM


Oh, I like to hear these kind of songs. Thank you.

etoodog

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2002-12-02 08:43 PM


Hello Cheryl

Thank you for taking me on the most wonderful journey to your beautiful country.  I could almost smell the frangipani flowers and see the beautiful hibiscus blooms which I just adored when I visited Hawaii in 1992.  Thanks for the memories.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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