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Where We Left Us (Part Two)
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Where We Left Us (Part Two) |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
Note from the author: You may have to find the first to understand the imagery in the beginning of this one. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and on our picnic blanket ocean we dined heavily on hope. We walked on sand that scattered at our feet and it seemed as if each grain parted, politely curtsying before the air of us. I remember no words and the only way our mouths moved was to speak in a whispered lip language against one another. We were delicate and I found that our arms smiled back at one other. "You put a stain on all of my good days." Matchbox Twenty "Disease" [This message has been edited by She (12-01-2002 12:34 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I remember no words and the only way our mouths moved was to speak in a whispered lip language against one another." Smiling at this great line. And I remember the first post. Welcome again, SHE. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Delightfully descriptive! I enjoyed reading and envisioning this loving beach experience! Earth Angel |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is very descriptive and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Now, I have to go find the first part.... Welcome to Passsions, quite talented you are.... Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"and I found that our arms smiled back at one other" curious as to the "one other"?---a read as softly romantic as the first--enjoyed!! |
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cherrylips Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 51UK |
Interesting a good read cherrylipsx |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and may this beachside joy forever sing in your heart! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I just like "whispered lip language" a lot. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sexy beachy thoughts. |
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