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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-11-24 06:32 PM


As Scene In Snow

The hush of snow to my delight
Seems portrait pure in visions bright
As innocence returns to thrive
Upon the earth in soft contrive

Laments of frosting whipped to dust
Scenes still to softly sleep and must
Become the cast in winter white
The hush of snow to my delight

Forever cycles to the ground
Of crystal gems on starlight crowned
As innocence in stillness gleams
Upon the earth in sparkling sheens

And in the air the smell of calm
To fall so free and settle on
Before the fire in crackling melt
The hush of snow can still be felt

All this as seen from where we are
Before us falls such peace by far
Seems picture perfect all about
To lay in wait the night white out

Copyright Kkh 11/24/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-24 07:02 PM


Thwaaaak~~!!!!~~~GOTCHA!!!
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2 posted 2002-11-24 07:04 PM



This fits your pen name so well...
I think we need a smilie presenting a diamond...for a gem of a post...

Now I have to go tell Kit.  

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3 posted 2002-11-24 07:05 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) I love snow so much and love envisioning it like Mother Nature sleeping under her white velvet blanket as I too see it as innocence of nature, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-11-24 07:30 PM


...BEAUTIFUL!!...

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Salty
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5 posted 2002-11-24 08:04 PM


Pure as the Driven SNOW...a lovely write!


jwesley
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6 posted 2002-11-24 08:47 PM


Beautiful my friend...wish I was there seeing it for real...

jwesley

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7 posted 2002-11-24 10:16 PM


Kathleen - this is beautiful & a keeper!! thankyou for this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Robert Adamson
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8 posted 2002-11-24 11:15 PM


When in the snow, I find time to play. I really like the play on words too. Thank you.

etoodog

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9 posted 2002-11-25 01:23 AM


absolutely lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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10 posted 2002-11-25 06:53 AM


so softly beautiful......this is LOVELY
BloomingRose
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11 posted 2002-11-25 07:35 AM


Oh wow!! A beautiful portrait you paint!
Enjoyed immensely.

Deb

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12 posted 2002-11-25 09:39 AM


I echo the above sentiments.  Beautiful.
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13 posted 2002-11-25 09:42 AM


Your lovely poem almost makes winter welcome. Enjoyed.
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14 posted 2002-12-20 04:56 AM


I want snow! I gotta go travel!
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