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journey to nowhere |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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In the haven of majesty the tombs vanish beneath the eyes of dread of Lord within the sanctity of managed doom-- a map--with pins press point of gloom. A simple man armed with pushpins maps his way across the ford-- of lands that beg a man's begin and beg a hero in adore... Break the herb upon the stem just above the thri-fold glance of this corner scratching eye-- what it took--to make me cry-- I need to open up floodwall-- I need a grave in which to fall. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
pain |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice last lines! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Fantastic writing sweet poet; I absolutly love the way you outline your point . Lovely poetry from a lovely person  - thought I'd take you up on the wink suggestion ... he he he .L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, The cycle swings and ofen sings. I feel the wind your cycle brings. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I need to open up floodwall-- I need a grave in which to fall. Wow, love the last lines 'O Gorgeous one. enjoyed. Maree  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
she real cool |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity~ Very deep thoughts...Paul Rise above the gloom & doom Release yourself from this tomb |
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