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we and friday mornings meet
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we and friday mornings meet |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279
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We and friday mornings meet or have before and so there is a death to it and us and I’m uneasy as I go. Who will walk the pocket seams the stitchings of the fall when they mark a year or more for I’m attached to all. Who will weed the winter garden keep the soil balanced clean when only it an hour took and I on you have learned to lean. We and friday mornings meet or have before and so there is a death to it and us and I’m uneasy as I go. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yep, a write, right up my alley Ed |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
it... it... it rhymes!  and i like it... omg, what have you done to me!!! |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Very nice write. Thank you for sharing. Poetry is love and love is life. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very heartfelt... nicely written.. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I won't say I understand it all but there is a cadence call the words shall linger in my brain like a worry bead's clicked refrain |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sounds as though a life changing decision's been made. Just recall how TGIF and Saturdays are often adventures followed by a day of rest. Good luck. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at Christopher's astonishment--indeed it does, and I love the curling of language to this, the unusual structure of your imagery reminds me very much of another favorite poet from passions, redheart angrybraids... the spiral inward then outward to a point, unexpected and well worth the trip. oh..and not only did it rhyme, but it's almost a sonnet...smiling again. love it. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
It would seem that a bit of the cummings bug has bitten in the rhyme of this one. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~  . I know, I know. And you don't have to say that you like it, in order to stop in and comment about the rhyme. But if you do,...then ahh haa haa. Thanks to all for reading and replying with such comments, such carefulness, little rhymes and understanding. *Peace poets. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Add one more to the growing legion of followers to you every post. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Did you realise you had a "legion of followers"? You do you know! Another awesome write from your pen, you take care! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on ~ Jackson Browne [This message has been edited by EagleOne (11-28-2002 03:34 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Alicia I love the grace of words that is you. You always suceed in making me listen. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
oh, and i wanted to return to say how much i loved the title on this. very very cool |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
I love that title  good write much enjoy Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
An incredible write with powerful images--and time passes, frightening when we actually stop to consider how quickly--enjoyed! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent as always m'friend  You never cease to amaze me. adding to my library. Maree |
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