Open Poetry #23 |
Just Love Me Back |
Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
Just love me back. Just pay attention and show me your love. look at me and express what it is that you want to say. I'm waiting and will wait until the day we find ourselves together. I've never lost hope nor have I lost my confidence that there's really a right time for me to know how it feels to be loved by you. I'm afraid you deserve someone better or worse, someone good; someone you can show off to the world; someone who'll make you the envy of everybody; someone who is exactly the contrary of myself. I'm sure people will just laugh at you, and heaven forbid, pity you for falling in love with me. If I am to follow what my heart is saying, I will ask you to stay beside me, hug me, kiss me... love me.. don't mind what other people say. Just look at me, I suggest from afar, and let your eyes do the talking with my heart and weary soul. Just love me back.. between miles.. and that's enough...my love, that's enough... Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice, I enjoyed it much. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Kristine I hope this is not a literal view of yourself. If it is then it's very harsh and totally without substance. [This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-28-2002 01:26 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kristine, this is very beautiful and well-written, but so sad. I also hope that it's not about you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
I feel this way at times..Symptoms of very low self asteem right here |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't sell yourself short... |
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Sweetiepie38 New Member
since 2002-11-28
Posts 5 |
I agree with garysgirl its a great poem. I hope its not about you.But I know where you are coming from and, if it is you things will get better. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The search for love will take us into the fire of despair...when truly if the gift given is not received...it is not deserved. Take heart in your own beauty...that is the real gift. ThisDiamond |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
The title is so great. It is a wish and a command. And you say much about a heart's desire. Thank you. etoodog |
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Smoothy Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 119The dark side of the moon |
I have unintentional low self esteem and was quite touched by this sad piece. I always try to relate other poets' work to my life to better understand it. This wasn't that hard to do so. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Kristine, I enjoyed your words, thank you. Never self belittle for manners takes so little Never beg the devil to come back Expect respect and giving with whom you might be living Or give that strange relationship the sack For love is what we search for, nothing matters much more The days and weeks continue right or wrong The feel of joy through trying, each hope one not denying Makes the thought of happiness so strong Sincerely Rick Hope to see you more! |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
!! Thanks for the replies!! Rick, special thanks for your heartwarming comment! |
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