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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-01 09:29 PM


Snow Kissed Stirring

you glitter gleam
dressing me
in white lace
gently caressing
and kissing lashes
your tender touch
brings shivers
a veiling
covering completely
stirring my warmth

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-12-01 09:51 PM


Very nice...James
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just out of reach
2 posted 2002-12-01 11:07 PM


Lovely Helen. snowy Ontario hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Robert Adamson
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3 posted 2002-12-02 12:24 PM


I feel a kind respect for a little snow  through your new eyes. Thank you.

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whiskey
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4 posted 2002-12-02 12:27 PM


Very nice
Have never seen snow before can imagine its beauty though

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2002-12-04 06:35 AM


the images of white lace as your dress are pretty. nice, delicate poetry
Sandpiper
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land of flora and fauna
6 posted 2002-12-04 06:59 AM


Soft and smooth as fresh fallen snow--enjoyed!
regards2you
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7 posted 2002-12-04 09:15 AM




Helen, this is great. I love it.


Warm regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-12-04 09:32 AM


Oooooh...beautiful Helen..
I love this!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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