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The Flame
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The Flame |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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You know, if you could drift into the flame with me, we could hold each other through the rage, let the heat of flame burn it all away. I'll hold your hand if you like and if need be I'll cover you with the moisture of my life to shelter you from death as we peruse the depths of the flame's abyss. Oh, what heated dreams of passion we may find if we go deep. WhiteRose "my reflection becomes me" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Anne, this is sooooo sensually gorgeous, sweet friend, may you find much special gifts within the flame and may your moth of destiny keep coming and giving presence to your light, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The mood of exploration...nice write. ThisDiamond |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem was so hot that it melted my monitor! EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thanks all for commenting. This one was a little demented.  I think I'm just burning too many candles over here. Again, thanks for reading and responding. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, what heated dreams of passion we may find if we go deep. Indeed Indeed!  Still burning those candles? Enjoyed Ms Rose Maree  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Maree, I'm still burning those candles. Thanks for bringing this one up from the back pages, it is most appreciated. |
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