Open Poetry #23 |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
The tic and the toc, dance and they mock. Last time i looked, No reply. The chime, startles me every time. Alarm bells deafen, waking a new thought. Where are you now? Who's hearing your voice? Not me,oh not me. If I were you, I'd remember. How you feel, When i give you no reply. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. [This message has been edited by gemjop (11-29-2002 12:07 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I have known this enchanting clock...the wrestle within the self for what is longing...Take heart...as so often over time becomes a clearer way. ThisDiamond |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am certain that every reader will have identified with this at one time or another! You captured the feelings exactly--and so poetically! Earth Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad, I think. There's nothing worse than being ignored. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Gemma, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, no one should ever be ignored and I hope soon love reaches out to you with faithfulness and sympathy! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thankyou so much for your replies. good news, i got my long awaited reply, and it was more than worth waiting for! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its always the same old story, you cant see whats in front of your eyes, cause your too busy looking in the distance |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
it is true, being ignored or forgotten is one of the worst feelings in the world. but i'm glad you got your reply. good write and thanks for sharing. /jen/ i'm freezing, i'm starving, i'm bleeding to death. everything's fine. [tracy bonham] |
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