Open Poetry #23 |
Her Heartbeat Quickens |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Her Heartbeat Quickens These days it’s hard to find a man that treats a woman with respect, who longs to gaze into her eyes to see in hers, his own, reflect. A woman is art in the flesh. Each curve of desire feeds the eyes. Her heartbeat quickens at your touch and your own quickens with her sighs. You’ll find that she has intellect and grow to love all that she is. The body ages, but her heart is where a man should place his kiss. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
...A woman is art in the flesh... How true this is... and a man can be the sculptor... if he chisles so... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michael, Her heart is where a man should place his kiss. OH! How beautiful is this? This is a wonderful love poem, so deep, caring and wise. I think you've captured the way true love is. Such a joy to read of it. Hugs and warmest regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-03-2002 05:00 PM).] |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Beautiful words such as these should definitely be told to someone special. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Such sweet words....from a true heart. I bet you do just fine with the ladies *S* ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."her heart is where a man should place his kiss"---I may not be your woman, but I just felt a warm and loving kiss on my heart.... Your tenderness and gentle expression of love literally caused tears to fall from my eyes of blue........now my eyes are red, but my heart is happy! ~ sending you angel kisses EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The body ages, but her heart is where a man should place his kiss." Michael..what can I say? You obviously know the tender heart of a woman well. This is so very romantic!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael Tender and endearing, just like you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Michael....awesome thoughts and very much on target.... Nicely said, and I do believe you have made a lot of friends with this write... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so sweet Michael, as is yourself. It reminds me of that old saying, there is a place you can touch a woman that will drive her crazy....... her heart. Very well done m' friend! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Michael - Ahhh sweet poet, this makes me sigh with pleasure. This poem is going directly into my library. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Michael, it is so sad but true, sweet friend, so many men fail to realize what true love is and only care of the silicone or outside beauty and never listen to a womans needs or desires with respect, as the heart is what should be touched affectionately with love! (sigh) I dream so much of making my Joanna happy forever and loving her with all my heart, God Bless You, you are a true romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"These days it’s hard to find a man that treats a woman with respect, who longs to gaze into her eyes to see in hers, his own, reflect. A woman is art in the flesh... The body ages, but her heart is where a man should place his kiss." _________________________________ B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! The entire poem is worthy of applause and all men should take heed to such wise words. The message in this should come naturally to all men, however, it seems that it's become a long forgotten art. I'm keeping this and am gonna Fed Ex it to all of the men in Canada Remember, when you start that seminar for men in North America - I'm your manager! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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