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The Eye of I
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The Eye of I |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Eye of I I followed the angst of my mind Into malaise of nonaligned I phased the fruits of fantasy And glazed then on my privacy A world of sighs and butterflies Of golden skies and hybridize A world of dally thoughts and dove Of sensuality and love. A world of placid greenery A place of softest scenery An Eden filled with glories vend A glen that willed forever’s bend. And there I held a candle tall To light this wishful bramble wall To see in magic clouds above The face of my exotic love A face that haunts my primal eye The face that taunts the eye of I |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Aye....this is good one cye |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, all you need is love and I wish we can all realize that so we can make such an Eden possible! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toerag You got a mind like a steel trap. SNAP Noah, Thank you for the wonderful comment. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, you paint a most tranquil picture of an Eden here. Enjoyed the morning read. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea...you're right, and I keep my trap shut too?.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Thank you sweet, hugs and have a good one. Toe, The trap is shut but the mind flies. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Into malaise of nonaligned  I phased the fruits of fantasy And glazed then on my privacy A world of sighs and butterflies Of golden skies and hybridize ============================== and those will be my eye spy waaaay cool lines of the day!! and just look at these delightful cadenced kissed couplets of internal rhymes divine... An Eden filled with glories vend A glen that willed forever’s bend. And there I held a candle tall To light this wishful bramble wall love the view thru the eyes of you  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
not you too... hugs to you... some days it just doesn't pay to get off the couch. OH. come to think of it, it doesn't pay to stay there either. a sigh for sy? With a morning hug. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Well that will be my dish of ice cream for today. Thank you for seeing more then a pretty write and you really are a delight. WWRS  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I knew you would understand. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
An I for a U, Sy? This sounds like an isle to C... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I so enjoy Janet's responses to your poetry and her appreciation for the level of skill you use when crafting these daily poems. I look for content and then go back to see what her references are; the ones which read so smoothly I don't even notice them, not to mention I'm still too much a novice to pick them out myself. You teach that art while at the same time touch the very center of us, one way or the other. Thank you. Enjoyed this a great deal. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A world of placid greenery A place of softest scenery An Eden filled with glories vend A glen that willed forever’s bend. What a beautiful picture painted with your words Seymour. Lovely. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, An eye for an I, that is my sigh. LOL Pat, You are a sweet thing and a pleasure to read. Chris, Thanks for the lovely. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Mr. Seymour, for showing us the "magic clouds above", seen through your eyes this morning. As always, I thoroughly enjoyed. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl You are a dear, thank you for the read. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
This sounds almost like a mystical chant...full of spirit and energy. I enjoyed the read much!! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Salty Thanks for the read and nice comment. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can remember... it wasn't so very long ago when I first began reading your poetry... and how blessed I felt after each read. Nice to know I still feel that way. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Joining Toe in the trap....SNAP!!! Nice one Syster.....yep it is... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Thank you my friend for the read and reply. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You know I know the magic of the poetic sy sigh, don't you? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Shucks I thought it was a secret. LOL |
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