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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-11-29 07:57 AM

solitary bird
flying over
the abandoned tree,
both sharing
the uncertain skies
approaching,
as november
ends
in a
haunting chill

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-11-29 08:00 AM

inkedgoddess
Empathy in its full, enjoyed.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-11-29 10:14 AM

like this for both the imagery and the metaphor...

short, stark..and lost..

all too often..all too often

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-11-29 10:56 AM

Oh my, if this isn't perfect, I wouldn't know what was, then....

I love this! wow...

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-11-29 10:57 AM

What riches found within the solitary skies...
Beautiful write. ThisDiamond

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2002-11-29 10:59 AM

thanks,

and what riches found in solitude too, sometimes, nothing sweeter or saner!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-11-29 11:21 AM

Liked this one, Marie

Solitude? Is where I find myself. Found myself. Am myself.

Ed

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

7 posted 2002-11-29 12:32 PM

loved. genius.
lots of love, gemmaxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-11-29 12:35 PM

whoa...what a chill!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-11-29 01:30 PM

(sigh) Yet solitude holds much charity, and charity is but a token of gratitude for having contribute to solitude! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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