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VirginWoman New Member
since 2002-11-28
Posts 2Las Vegas |
Are you done yet? Aren't you bored? You alwaays play the same exact game I'm tired of it I'm surprised you're not But then again, it's you we're talking about No one's been able to figure you out What makes me think I'm any different? Just sulk in your misery, don't tell anyone And if it doesn't work out...blame it on me It's okay, go ahead, I want you to I want to feel used I just realized that I don't know how that feels I'll try anything twice, right baby? Isn't that right? You know all about it You're the one that made me If it weren't for you Oh, if it weren't for you Then maybe, maybe I'd be happy I hope you dwell on the fact that I still dwell on you. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
it's typed the way you talk, and i like that. it's just subtle enough, a little edgy, and dripping with sarcasm...and maybe a hint of longing with that poison. but most of all, you're bored with it all. a superb entrance if i may say so. enjoy your stay here, however long it ends up being. this place helped me a lot, and not just with my writing. listen to Aimee Allen's "Revolution" while ya read this. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
There are moments when used feels good. I didn't think one could get bored in Vegas. Welcome. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions... Emotions live here in harmony. ThisDiamond |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done, you are very welcomed here. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Welcome to passions... an interesting, dark, masochistic piece. Christopher |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
This is very nice,, Hugesss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions VW - Please! Make yourself comfortable, have a good time reading, and if you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us. AND...check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I kinda liked your original name...oh well welcome again. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS VW! I know you will enjoy yourself here. I look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sarcastic and biting with a regret and tinge of longing... nicely done |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ariola, WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY I hope that you like it here. This was a very emotional first post and very well-written. The people here welcome you with open arms and try to help in lots of ways. I've really found a "home" here among this wonderful "Family of Friends", and I hope that you do, too.  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-29-2002 09:22 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome To Passions - Enjoyed your write. Looking forward to more. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A good first byte. Welcome to Passions. Didn't know Vegas had V's. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ariola, my heart goes out to you, I understand the use of sarcasm and feel we all need to say it in order to feel better every once in a while, I go by an alter-ego here also and use sarcasm under that name, this is a heartwrenching debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ariola, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ariola, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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