Open Poetry #23 |
Losers |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It is not so much, that you win and I lose that bothers me but more that the scent of smug hovers in the stifling air. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That is usually about the time I say, "Oh Yeah? RE-MATCH!" Nothing like the smell of smug to bring out "killer instinct" in me! wonderful write, Keth! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Excelent write, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sister poet, you sure got that right! Aye! There's the rub! The look on the face That is so smug! A great right write! P.S. I can lend you the cloth I use to wipe the smug off of some faces! tehe Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-29-2002 10:30 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, and that really hurts. However, what goes around comes around, and sometimes we get to see it....and then have to stiffle the smirks. You captured much here...like this. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent and eloquent delivery. Bravo...ThisDiamond |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kethry~ Ah yes...so true. Well said, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kethry, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to youin hope these feelings are long gone now, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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