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Love & Enmity
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Love & Enmity |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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The teeth of enmity leave me torn and strewn like carrion upon a field of failed love While the looming shadows of loneliness,despair and self-doubt circle high above (the other side of love) there i posted it Ed Raph [This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-29-2002 12:01 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
And? You threw this away? Glad that you dug it out of the dustbin. Ed |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raphael, I'm glad that you didn't leave this thrown away. I'm really glad that you posted it. it is very good. Thank you for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Aenimal~ I've read this about 5 times now. It just keeps calling me to read it again, and that's a good thing. A well written piece and I enjoyed.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...the other side of love... I must remember this... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Is your dustbin full? Maybe it's time to dump a few more like this onto the blue pages? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Many thanks but I think you're all too kind. |
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Jamie Dawg Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 35 |
wow. i love the feeling in this. passion and more passion! very cathartic. Respect JD xx |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Raphael, this is wonderful, I'm so glad you didn't dispose of this gem as this truly is wonderful! Sometimes I dispose of some of my poems but always have something up my sleeve, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Much respect JD and thank you Noah as always for the kind words. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
that's exactly how i picture enmity... thanks for not trashin this. it's dark. i like it. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gut-wrenching but with a bit of genius thrown in for good measure! Excellent! EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, its feels like this,some days, anyhow - love hurts, then you die........... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Glad you like it Ethan Halo Linda, genius? If there truly is a fine line between genius and insanity then meeting me you'd agree its the latter. lol inkedgoddess it's not all bad though is it? No really is it? I can't remember..  |
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