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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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0 posted 2002-12-01 12:52 PM

The sands of time
flow too warm for me
to walk through
year after year.
My feet recoil from the
heated memories
burned into my
inner core.

I've peeled away
many layers of you,
yet you remain a burning desire
and I cannot reach inside
and douse the fires.

Why can't I remove
the seed of Love
that will never bear fruit?
Why can't I
cool this flame
that consumes me?

The heat of the moment
is long gone.
Yet the embers smoulder
with hopes that
you will re-ignite
the flames of Love
that refuse to be
extinguished
from this
scorched heart.

And I don't even know
if you still breathe.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-01-2002 01:18 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-12-01 01:06 AM

I commend you for your ability to write these raw writes! My hair got singed just from reading your burning words!

Very well written!

EA

Midnitesun

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2 posted 2002-12-01 01:12 AM

Sorry for the singe, but thank you for reading, and for understanding and feeling.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-01-2002 01:13 AM).]

Midnitesun

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3 posted 2002-12-01 01:17 AM

Duncan, thanks for burning this title for me.

I already had the poem written but the title refused me until I read your "with disclaimer" poem. Jiminy thanks you.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-01-2002 01:21 AM).]

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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4 posted 2002-12-01 01:22 AM

Why can't I remove
the seed of Love
that will never bear fruit?

These cut deeply, too many times have I suffered this fate..thank you for expressing my thoughts with your perfect words.

Midnitesun

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5 posted 2002-12-01 01:25 AM

Thank you. If I ever find the cure for this disease I'll share it with you.

Skyfire

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6 posted 2002-12-01 04:05 AM

Hol-ey crow! That was just so powerful (forgive the gushieness) to me

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
I'm Rhondiforous!

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-12-01 10:24 AM

Well Kacy, the title's the only part of mine that made much sense, even to me...lmao. You certainly did it more justice than I did. Very cool poem.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-12-01 10:34 AM

"And I don't even know
if you still breathe."

Kacy, there is so much emotion and feeling
in this beautiful poem. You have an amazing
ability to pull the reader in with your strong
emotions you write down. Thank you for sharing
your heart with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-01-2002 10:35 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2002-12-01 11:04 AM

The heat of the moment
is long gone.
Yet the embers smoulder
with hopes that
you will re-ignite
the flames of Love
that refuse to be
extinguished
from this
scorched heart.

And I don't even know
if you still breathe.

Very impressive Kacy, a

!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2002-12-01 02:45 PM

you got it so good, thats why you still have it so bad for him, dont you know?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-12-01 08:06 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Kacy, this certainly is a disease and my heart goes out to all who experience this and I hope this doesn't relate to you now, sweet friend, this smolders with such angst, I love your style, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2002-12-01 10:03 PM

YOWZERS!!!!!!
this is a moth anthem ...
felt the heat and ache from here...
smoke and ash girlie...smoke and ash.
Love this side of your pen.(IWIHWT)

LOL@Dunc...yeah right...didnt relate to a word of this huh??? no pretty blue flame here

heh!

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

13 posted 2002-12-01 10:28 PM

Some sparks won't die....ever. Enjoyed

Midnitesun

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14 posted 2002-12-01 10:30 PM

Skye, holy crow? LOL. thanks

Duncan, only the title, huh? if only you knew...

Ethel, thanks for your reply. Sometimes I eat my own heart.

inkedgoddess, glad that you enjoyed my pain.

Donna, humbled thank yous

Noah, always open hearted and compassionate.

mothqueen, the song of you too?
If we burn at the same time will these pages melt?

Midnitesun

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Posts 28647
Gaia

15 posted 2002-12-01 10:32 PM

So true, Richard. Thank you for sharing some heart pain.

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