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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I’ve forgotten what I liked about this tune. Ok, that’s a lie. I remember exactly. Just didn’t seem worth the effort tonight. When I’d rather be with you effortlessly. And so… I am left to ponder with disclaimer of drunken self indulgence have I learned something or just gotten lazy? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 It's impossible to forget. And laziness isn't your style. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smak smak - wake up Duncan...it was only a dream and the tune was but a whippoorwill... smiling... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i hate having to censor myself for a man, not worth it, be yourself, if your too hot to handle for him, find antoehr, theyre waiting |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hmmmmm...perhaps a rewrite is in order.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yes, rise to the occasion, you are a wonderful person filled with so much strength and love and are bound to never fall as you are a resilient type! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just didn't seem worth the effort tonight. =========================== I KEEP telling ya......... it aint easy being a moth!! lmao   and? you can always claim and blame it on being crazy from the heat...blinded by the flame. heh |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I always like the refreshing clarity of your works Duncan. Much talent shines through, even through the haze. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Duncan, I like to read you poems, too. You always write with a lot "between the lines", or that's how I get it, anyway. You do have a lot of talent.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
if it's not worth the effort, then why do you keep doing it? of course, i know that's the point as well as the answer to the question, but it makes for some words strung together, don't it! |
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