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STRANGE SOUP
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dan wood Junior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 15 |
Strange Soup With a slurp and a gloop I guzzled hot soup Whilst reading the daily paper. Now soup made of glue is hellish to chew So lunchtime became quite a caper! I chewed and I chewed which is terribly rude Especially when wearing no pants. My cheeks became rounded and everything sounded Like dull aborigine chants! As my stomach was hollow I opted to swallow And quickly began feeling odd So I say with despair as I sit in my chair I’m a glue eating stupid old sod! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Thanks, I needed the laugh. Only thing I would change is aborigine to aboriginal. Enjoyed. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dan, this is really cute. And, I don't think I've welcome you to Passions in Poetry, yet. I do hope that you like it here. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more of your work. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Think I'll pass on the soup, but the write was funny.  |
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