navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » STRANGE SOUP
Open Poetry #23
Post A Reply Post New Topic STRANGE SOUP Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
dan wood
Junior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 15


0 posted 2002-11-27 03:54 AM



Strange Soup

With a slurp and a gloop I guzzled hot soup
Whilst reading the daily paper.
Now soup made of glue is hellish to chew
So lunchtime became quite a caper!

I chewed and I chewed which is terribly rude
Especially when wearing no pants.
My cheeks became rounded and everything sounded
Like dull aborigine chants!

As my stomach was hollow I opted to swallow
And quickly began feeling odd
So I say with despair as I sit in my chair
I’m a glue eating stupid old sod!

© Copyright 2002 dan wood - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-11-27 10:20 AM


Thanks, I needed the laugh. Only thing I would change is aborigine to aboriginal. Enjoyed.
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-11-27 11:59 AM


Dan, this is really cute. And, I don't think
I've welcome you to Passions in Poetry, yet.
I do hope that you like it here. I enjoyed
your poem and hope to read more of your work.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
3 posted 2002-11-27 12:24 PM


Think I'll pass on the soup, but the write was funny.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » STRANGE SOUP

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary