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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I have opened this window at a great cost to diminish these thoughts with iron clad words to spill these nothings with ghost-like proclivity ...to lessen ...to lessen to forget... to tread water until drowning- frozen arteries... cuts, immaterial the ship is sinking- my mind is breathing- the window is crashing- the blood is contained in the pine-wood box and I stand above myself, my words, disbelieving [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (11-28-2002 09:33 AM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Awesome post! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an intriguing write.. that lets me explore the metaphor without demanding I go one way only in doing so... I enjoyed |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Impressive! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Intriguing ... and quite spellbinding~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write Walt!! Enjoyed. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Very good read! |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
wow, thats all i have to say....wow Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Watching the history channel huh? Good poem. |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
That was me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The unthinkable, the unsinkable. So many ghosts. So many wandering thoughts. |
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