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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-12-01 09:06 PM



why should your life be spent on you
could you improve
most likely not
because you think you are the best
truly you aren't
but you cease to accept it
actually this is the case
with all of us
in some aspect
or nature
its always true no matter what
this is because no one is perfect
therefore everyone has to think
that they are
for this whole calculation to be true
in most cases in works out fine
i guess this story
is everyone's story
hopeless forever lost in a tranquil water base
did that make any sense
of course not
because life never has
all for the better i think
its always a surprise


Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

[This message has been edited by Riley (12-01-2002 09:08 PM).]

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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-01 09:34 PM


Yep, life is a surprise. Keep floating in a thought pond, Riley.
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-12-01 09:36 PM


Thoughts well stated.
ThisDiamond

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