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Open Poetry #23
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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2002-11-26 10:31 PM



at the strike
of midnight,
the ocean
becomes the
whore
of the moon,
dancing
seductively
under its
command,
i slip
through
the dark
entrance
immersed,
as i
surrender
this night
to
you
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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2002-11-26 10:33 PM

What beautiful imagry.

Enjoyed!
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-11-26 11:20 PM

Yes, beautiful in a dark, rythmic, glittering way.

Ed
Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648
3 posted 2002-11-27 02:00 PM

WOW!
Very powerful imagery there!
Thanks for sharing!
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
4 posted 2004-03-16 09:47 AM

see, this is grit mixed with beauty..i like that!
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