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Open Poetry #23

lament of the leaves

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-02 10:58 PM

swept off
in daydreams
as they come
drizzling down,
tenderly touching
they color
the ground,
changeable
landscape
as the
seasons revolve,
birth thru
rebirth,
leaves appear
then dissolve

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2002-12-02 11:00 PM

Beautiful imagery here!

Raph

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

2 posted 2002-12-02 11:42 PM

I like this!! It is a nice tight story, retold every season. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

3 posted 2002-12-03 09:28 AM

A smile is all you need. I like this too. Thank you.

etoodog

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-12-03 09:33 AM

inkedgoddess
Transmogrify, enjoyed.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-12-03 01:03 PM

InkedGoddess~
Very nice imagery~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2002-12-03 10:54 PM

seymour,
i learned a new word today........
transmogrify, thank you.........

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2002-12-04 12:25 PM

nice, nice...and I love the feeling of the last two lines!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

8 posted 2002-12-06 04:24 AM

They grace our spring and color our fall and then, begin again--comforting, somehow, to know there is a greater plan--enjoyed!

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

9 posted 2002-12-06 10:13 AM

wonderful imagery, I enjoyed this alot, I love watching the leaves change colour and fall to be re shot to a bright green leaf when the cold disapears.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

10 posted 2004-03-16 09:48 AM

OMG, loved this!
this, may end up being one of my faves of yours...just lovely

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