Open Poetry #23 |
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lament of the leaves |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
swept off in daydreams as they come drizzling down, tenderly touching they color the ground, changeable landscape as the seasons revolve, birth thru rebirth, leaves appear then dissolve |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful imagery here! Raph |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I like this!! It is a nice tight story, retold every season. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
A smile is all you need. I like this too. Thank you. etoodog |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Transmogrify, enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InkedGoddess~ Very nice imagery~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
seymour, i learned a new word today........ transmogrify, thank you......... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
nice, nice...and I love the feeling of the last two lines! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
They grace our spring and color our fall and then, begin again--comforting, somehow, to know there is a greater plan--enjoyed! |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
wonderful imagery, I enjoyed this alot, I love watching the leaves change colour and fall to be re shot to a bright green leaf when the cold disapears. |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
OMG, loved this! this, may end up being one of my faves of yours...just lovely ![]() |
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