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Of Dreams, and Fearing
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Of Dreams, and Fearing |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
OF DREAMS AND FEARING he reached into the spin, touched body of my sin, I stepped above his ground heard his song, felt his sound into me bled his needing, my earth received his seeding, sown ruins of my grace reaped silhouette, his fingers traced I lived, I died, he blinded me, I laughed, I cried, though silently, my fearing was that he would know, my fearing was that he would go, away I plea him stay he pours the liquid of my dreams |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful words Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is wonderfully descriptive, sweet friend, and may true love always be the liquid of your dreams and the ambrosia of your heart! (sigh) This is magnificent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandpiper, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah fear...awful awful fear. A start or a freeze....awful awful fear. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A fear that I think we all can identify with. complete thawing or total melt down...and dreams are reached, or faded. This is a very well written piece.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
fear...we all have one or more... nicely done Piper... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sandpiper, this is a very good poem, with lots of emotions and feeling. "Love makes the world go around" |
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