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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2002-11-23 10:15 PM

Asleep In Love

In the quiet,
after breathless rapture,
with you slick upon my skin,
your lips a tingling memory on my own,
when nothing but pounding hearts is heard...
you loosely hold my hand,
and I fall asleep...
in Love.

w. james beard, jr.
© nov 2002

[This message has been edited by jwesley (11-24-2002 08:41 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-11-24 12:17 PM

Enjoyed...James

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

2 posted 2002-11-24 01:01 AM

Very vividly described!
Thanks for sharing!
God bless!

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

3 posted 2002-11-24 07:26 AM

Reads like an inhaled whisper--enjoyed!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2002-11-24 07:58 AM

yep, to be lost in loves embrace without a
map...sounds good

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

5 posted 2002-11-24 10:44 AM

The babe in the picture
adds that much more
to this lovely.

Thank you, James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-11-24 03:38 PM

This is so beautiful and so much how it should be. A good smile to hold on to.
ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-11-24 07:03 PM

(smiles) Oh James, this is soooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, I love it!!! (sigh) May loves heart forever beat to yours in a song of eternal happiness, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-11-24 07:26 PM

Oh dang Jimmy!!
You wrote this perfectly!
Oh WOW! I love this.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

9 posted 2002-11-24 10:37 PM

jwesley...This is such a wondrous poem that sings of the deep well of your love. It rises up in the heart and pulls the heartstrings with its exquisite beauty.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2002-11-24 10:41 PM

beautiful...helen

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