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Open Poetry #23

disappearing

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-11-26 07:08 PM

surrounded in grey
birds fly off
at the sunsets finale,
another nighttime mystery
as they fall off the earth,
silent again until morning

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-26 07:15 PM

nice imagery here..and a metaphor for the ones we leave when we go home from work or school... people we spend a great deal of time with ( like them or not) They too vanish in the fall of sun...

enjoyed!

BTW... geese flying in the night are not silent

they can be pretty darned loud..

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-11-26 07:24 PM

I found myself watching until dusk passed into darkness. Great write. ThisDiamond

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2002-11-26 09:25 PM

thanks,
i really do find their disappearing act something
that always mesmorized me especially on summernights.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

4 posted 2002-11-26 10:05 PM

Hmmm Interesting write
Thomas

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