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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-11-26 09:51 AM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#90"

Copyright 2002 by:  MARK V SHELDON


memories

hidden vortices
to the past

spiral away

deep in
desolation

know
the silent
individual


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-26 10:03 AM


know... an interesting word...relative in meaning just as memories are relative to time.

thought provoking...and with your usual style and intellegence.

I enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-11-26 10:21 AM


MARK,
Good thought, good write, good read.

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Gaia
3 posted 2002-11-26 11:12 AM


Know my spiral.
Memories,
present,
spiral
to future.
Me.

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4 posted 2002-11-26 11:24 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Mark, I feel time is well proportionate to the meaning of memory, for when we are so young we tend to forget so many memories later but as we grow wiser we know which memories we should hold onto and know what is necessary and unnecessary! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-11-26 11:27 AM


...You are just SO amazing!

~Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus~

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6 posted 2002-11-26 12:08 PM




So true, but hopefully all may know a balance by having happy memories as well. And some of those are too precious to speak of. Knowing a bliss of silence, too.


Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2002-11-26 10:45 PM


Ron, thank you.  It's another paradox of  "knowing" relativity...

Sy...  you bring such good tidings;  I thank you.

Kacy -- an interesting mind-twist...

Noah:  if we're lucky...

Nancy -- actually, YOU are SO sweet.

Pat, balance is the ever-elusive grail which holds water for some and air for others...  

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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