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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-11-26 01:19 PM


As I make an effort to write
my feelings from my heart,
about you, my sweet love,
I don't quite know where to start
There are so very many emotions
churning around inside me
as I try to write them down
for you, my love, to see
Being apart, as we are now, makes it
hard for us, our love to show
Trying to make each other, through
other ways, this true love to know

You are the first thing I think of
when in the morning I awake
Then, at night when I close my eyes,
in dreams, images you and I make
Amazed am I at the emotions
thoughts of you make me feel
Though other loves I've had,
none have ever been so real
This love we've found
travels across the many miles
for each of us to feel,
Our love outweighs the trials

When we see each other face to face,
as we did a few days past
So hard we try our best to make,
each memory we share to last
The feel of your hands
as you gently touch my face
The lines and shape of it, with your
fingertips you lovingly trace
The looks we exchange, as we
gaze into each others eyes
Seeing far inside the other
where our deep emotion lies
Etched into our memories, when
for hours to each other we talk
Of our true love and other things
about this trail of life we walk

Our love would become special,
we knew from the moment we met
The chemistry exchanged between us
was as strong as it could get
We met about this time of year,
a few years ago, it's been
This love we share has grown each day,
more and more, since then
We have pledged to each other,
forever our hearts to give
To never part, to be together,
for as long as we both shall live


© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-26 01:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, your gorgeous love poems always tear me up because I feel this exact way for my Joanna and want to meet her so very much because I love her madly and want to spend my life with her as even thinking of her simple gorgeous smile melts my heart! (kiss on cheek) I am so happy for you and Gary, yay! (does happy dance) God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-26 02:58 PM


Noah, I thank you so much for reading my poem.
I always know that you'll read and understand them.
I wasn't sure anyone else besides Gary would understand
my love poems. I know now that you feel the same for
your Joanna. Thanks for always understanding and for
leaving such kind replies. I really do appreciate it, friend.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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3 posted 2002-11-26 04:11 PM


Ethel, such longing, such emotion in this one.  You two need to be together.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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4 posted 2002-11-26 04:27 PM


Yes Ethel, I love rading all of your wonderfull love poems. I am sure that Gary does too.

Never be normal!

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5 posted 2002-11-26 04:38 PM


wanted to post on this earlier and couldn't get a reply screen, but am here now wonderful write, it does my heart good to know that love is still alive and thriving
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6 posted 2002-11-26 08:08 PM


Michael, I know. We want to be together so badly. All we can do
right now, is to keep our faith in God and in each other,
and pray that the day will come soon that our dreams will
come true. Thank you for your reply.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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7 posted 2002-11-26 08:10 PM


Liz,
Thank you sweet little friend. I'm glad that you enjoy
reading my love poems. I really appreciate your reading
and replying to them.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

garysgirl
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8 posted 2002-11-26 08:11 PM


JB,
Thank you so much for reading my poem. I really appreciate
you coming back to reply and for the kind comment you made.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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