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Missing You |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Missing You Today becomes yesterday as words still echo in my mind Another day of hoping happiness… wanting to find Angry words spoken by you words that have shattered my heart My mind echo’s your words loudly praying today they depart A life of heartache and pain how long will this silence last Accused…no time to explain only memories from the past So close you and I once were now we never speak at all Nothing left but loneliness no more talks…you never call Albums of memories closed visions forever remain I thank God each day for you as I ask him to ease our pain No one was to blame it seems words spoken in anger then Relationship torn apart your words echo in mind again Will we share special times again like we shared from days gone by Will our hearts smile once again or forever ask God “Why” [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (10-11-2002 11:22 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Will we share special times again like we shared from days gone by Will our hearts smile once again or forever ask God “Why”  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Paul, this deeply touched my heart reading it, I hope this doesn't relate to your current feelings as I am sure with a golden heart like yours so many fruitful memories of love will fill you eternally! (sigh) This is sensitively heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon nyou! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I miss my Liam. But he will be home on the 13th. Good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is sad. I hope you are able to share special times again with the one you are missing. I know how you feel. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Aw, how sad. You wrote this so well. Can really feel your "missing her". Warmly, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-12-2002 01:12 AM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah...Thank you for caring. We all miss someone at one time or another, we just have to be strong & try to get over things that we have no control over...Paul loner_23~ Thank You for reading. I know you can't hardly wait till the 13th. Hope you have a wonderful time...Paul Sue~ Glad you enjoyed. I know your road has been pretty rocky lately, but we must always keep trying to find the happiness that awaits us in life...Thanks Paul regards2you~ (Pat)~ Thank you for your kind words.My only goal is to hopefully someday be a part of her life again...Paul |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Paul...I was really touched by this poem. Maybe, it's because my life has been touched by such pain in the recent past. This poem was beautifully written and beautiful in its expression of love still lingering. ***Ivy Rose |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ivy Rose~ I am so glad that you enjoyed this. My love for the person I write of in this poem goes to the deepest part of my heart and soul and no matter what happens she will always be my little girl...Paul |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paul - telling write... Hoping that things work out for you... BC |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill...Thanks poet sir.Glad you took the time to read. I have to believe that this disagreement will be worked out and our relationship will be stronger in due time...Paul |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Paul, my heart goes out to you. This was so sad to me. It made me think of how I would feel if my Gary and I had such a disagreement as this. I hope that things will soon work out for you and your loved one. Thanks for sharing your heart. Love To All, Ethel...garysgirl |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Patience, faith and trying to just take care of yourself and work on you....All else will take care of itself as well.... Beautifully sad Paul, best to you.. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ethel~ Your caring reply touches my heart. I know that eventually this will all work out, because my faith is strong and will not waver. Thank You...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Mangus...Thank you sir, Your words echo my feelings exactly, Faith, Hope & Patience will see me through this. Thanks...Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Strong feelings, so beautifully expressed here, Paul... I hope things work out soon for you ~ hopeful hugsLyra |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Paul, I can feel your pain in my own way. I have a friend that is an ex, that I have tried to contact, but he has not responded to ICQ's or e mails in several months. I am trying to figure out why the friendship seems to have disappeared all of a sudden. Thanks for sharing your heart. I hope and pray things work out for you. Dawn |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lyra~ Thanks for the hugs. Glad you enjoyed. My writting helps me to cope at times like these...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dawn~Thank you for caring. Try as we might we just have to wait for things to calm down for a little while and hope that everything will be okay. I tried the e mail thing also but no reply. Best wishes to you & hope things turn out good for you...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (10-16-2002 12:34 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Paul, Don't know if the little girl is your daughter. But I do know that I went through that with mine. Turned out to be a big bump in the road. Peace and courage to you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul Love takes some bumpy roads sometimes...and anger can fly like the wind...tear, and then be gone. This hurts to read as I understand this painful feeling...and wish you peace and love in the future. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Larry...Your caring words help ease the sorrow."You hit the nail on the head" with the D word. Thanks very much...Paul Martie~ Thanks for caring & understanding. Your sweet words echo in my mind. Let this terrible time begone. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Hope your pain has passed.... beautiful write... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Zinsser ( Connie ) Thank you for caring & taking time to read. Nothing has changed in our relationship including my love for her which will always remain...Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a beautiful write, Paul... I have really enjoyed watching your poetry evolve... Keep up the great writing  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lyra~ Thank you sweet lady. Your words of encouragement mean so much to me...Paul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so sad! I've been there too. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
paul paul paul you make my heart ache |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
passing shadows~ Thank you for reading. The hurt never ends, but the reality of it has set in and I will survive. Thank you for caring...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Helen~ I am so sorry I caused you sadness, one of us is enough. We face life one day at a time and survive.Thanks for your caring reply...Paul |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Paul, as I read this over again on the back pages, I decided to reply again. I found in your response to Larry's reply that you were speaking of your daughter in the poem. It really reached home then, because I'm going through the same thing with my only child. Because of circumstances I won't go into right now, we haven't seen each other for many years. She left home before she was twenty years old and got married not long afterwards. I recently found her through the internet and we have spoken on the phone and through the internet. We live thousands of miles apart and neither of us can afford to travel the distance to see each other face to face. She says that she wants us to have a Mother-daughter relationship like before, but hardly ever returns e-mails or phone calls. I am trying very hard, just as you are, to keep the hope and faith that God will work out all these things that came between me and her. The events that took place had nothing to do with my daughter and myself. Other persons were the ones who caused all the misunderstandings between me and her. Paul, I didn't mean to say all this, but I just wanted you to know that I understand a little of what you're feeling. I wrote a poem last week about me and my daughter, but I haven't gotten the nerve to post it yet. The holidays are really hard, aren't they? "Love makes the world go around" |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paul Your words were filled with sadness and really pulled at my heartstrings. Beautifully written from such a talented pen. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ethel~ Thank you so much for the lovely reply. I hope everything works out between you & your daughter. Holidays will be real hard to deal with this year, but hopefully they will get better. If you think it will help I encourage you to either post or send the poem you wrote about your daughter to her, words shared can mean so much when relationships are strained. Again Thank You for the lovely caring reply...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Suetang~ Your sweet reply touches my heart. Thank you for caring. I will be fine Sue. As my motto goes " To share my poems is to share my heart" I only wish that I could share them both with my daughter...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (11-26-2002 07:19 PM).] |
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