Open Poetry #23 |
First Love, Fond Memories |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I was on holiday in Europe In the Summer of '84 It was the trip of a lifetime There was so much to explore A handsome Frenchman was my first love Back when I was twenty one Before him love eluded me I thought I might become a nun But the spell of love washed over me In Vienna on that day As we dined by candlelight My inhibitions flew away We travelled across to Venice The city of love on the sea It was there that I found love And I lost my virginity Our love was kept a secret But my smile I could not hide When the time came to depart There were so many tears I cried This tale is fact not fiction And I swear it is all true As I expose myself completely And share my life with each of you * * * * I guess, like most people, your first love is never forgotten and I am so fortunate to have memories from some of the most beautiful and romantic cities in the world.If I had my time over I wouldn't change a thing. I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, this was wonderful!--Your experience and your sharing of it! What a memorable trip that was! Those wonderful memories are like gifts that keep on giving and giving! Loved the photo as well! Linda |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
We can never forget our first lover. You were lucky enough to find yours in one of the most romantic cities on earth. Venice, one of my most favorite spots. Loved this lots ... hugs, Marti |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Quite an open, sharing write here, my friend, so personal, yet so wonderful... loved the read jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to have fond memories...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very open and honest sharing of something I think we all remember.. our first love... I enjoyed...and the image just adds to the story.. very nicely done. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry as I know how first love is so special and I long so much to finally meet my Joanna in Palm Beach and share my first kiss with her and date her! (kiss on cheek) I wish the afterglow of love to always shine in your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is a beautiful memory that you have written about. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Oh, it all sounds so romantic. I allways wanted to travel to France or Ittaly. My mom wantd to take me to Fiji, which sounds just as beautifull. Never be normal! |
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