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Elan
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0 posted 2002-11-25 10:51 AM



Whisper, overused.
How else to define your voice?

Just murmur, in your
lean closer.

Low pet sounds,
electric on skin.

Shuddering love.




[This message has been edited by Elan (11-25-2002 11:17 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-11-25 10:56 AM


Sensualy soft.  Enjoyed much.
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-25 11:00 AM



"Shuddering love"--ooh la la!

EA

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3 posted 2002-11-25 11:12 AM


Elan, so good to see you here.
and this...is oh so sensual.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-25 12:25 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may love forever tame your heart like a teddy bear hug, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-11-27 02:46 AM


whoa! Nice!
scorpio
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6 posted 2002-11-27 08:53 AM


Very sensual...electric on the skin...charging the mind..

...believe what your heart feels...

passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-12-15 05:32 AM


this is just so sensual, I had to send it up again
Duncan
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8 posted 2002-12-15 04:32 PM



...damn

Martie
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9 posted 2002-12-15 04:45 PM


Elan...I'm smiling!
Magnus
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10 posted 2002-12-15 04:54 PM


I could go two directions with this....OYEAH....

I won't get into the details.....I WON'T,
I WON'T....Keep repeating this Mag....keep
repeating this...

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