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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-12-14 07:55 PM

The Black and Blue of You

~~*~~

No hue of you
on a moonless night,
but there's richness I feel,
when embraced, your hold tight.
The warmth of your arms
possess all I need
to remain in your presence
in the eyes of your feed.

~~*~~

I think of you often,
perhaps,a little too much
and I silently speak
to myself of your touch
and the rise of the rhythm
when near you, I become.
I think of you often,
when yesterday's done.

~~*~~

The darkness that moods you
does mirror my own,
but the obvious settles
for time, all alone
with my thoughts reaping blue
of the eyes that can see
and the blackness of doubting
that comes over me.

~~*~~

Do you ever feel bruised
by the banter of words,
by the crushing of feelings
when words are unheard?
Do you silently speak
of the black in your blue?
Do you know that the truth is,
I'm here, just for you.

~~*~~

I am holding my own
on this quiet of nights
watching the darkness
of the words in my write,
wishing the moments would
have you in hold.
'Til then I am with you
in the words, yours, of old.

~~*~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-12-14 07:59 PM

hugs friend....

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-12-14 08:09 PM

back
just sitting here thinking...letting my mind do the wandering act it likes to do...
I think I am off to an early bedtime

M

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-12-14 08:12 PM

i'm here at the office. No one else in the building and I trying to straighten out some database errors... what a way to spend a Sat night huh?

well if you are off to bed..sleep well my friend..

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-12-14 08:16 PM

Love it Maureen...
great rhyme scheme.
Very much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

5 posted 2002-12-14 08:27 PM

Maureen

Painful words from the heart. Is it possible to love too much? Sometimes I think so.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-12-14 08:44 PM

liked it

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

7 posted 2002-12-15 04:38 AM

the first line of each stanza is awesome! and what follows is perfect.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2002-12-15 05:07 PM

Enchantress...glad you enjoyed it Nancy *s

hugsss
M

Martie, well I do believe we can love too much, it's in the returning that makes the difference. *s
Maureen

vandana, thankyou for reading

Dixie, sometimes I think you are my twin but knowing you are younger proves it isn't so *s
M

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