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scorpio
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0 posted 2002-11-25 10:17 AM



Crushed

I can't believe I didn't see it in your eyes.
Or that I missed it in your sighs.
A game played with my heart.
Why didn't I see it from the start?

Is it because it was real?
Was it something I really did feel?
I'm to blame for all of this.
And it was all true...in your kiss.

...believe what your heart feels...

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Elan
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since 2002-05-03
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State of Wide Eye
1 posted 2002-11-25 10:22 AM



Some things
are not games...
there stretches an urgency
in this write...
I do hope the right eyes
see it.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-11-25 10:43 AM



Perhaps this may just be a temporary dip in the love meter. Hopefully, she will soon put the smile back on your face, if not, trust that the Universe may have someone in mind who could bring even more light into your life.

EA

Corinne
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state of confusion
3 posted 2002-11-25 10:46 AM


No, you're not all to blame. Takes two to tango, my dear.

Cor

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-25 11:38 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Scorpio, things like this can happen every now and then, sweet friend, may her smile return again today and foreber make your heart beat with love you so much deserve! (sigh) This is so gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MidnightSkyeBlue
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since 2002-11-24
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5 posted 2002-11-25 11:49 AM


I feel your words in all seriousness deja vu to my heart...I'm going through a brush of disillusionment and turmoil I knew better but then again did I really?
Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-11-25 05:06 PM


Ah dear Scorpio, it is so unfair for someone to play games with another's heart.  But do keep in mind what Earth Angel said.."trust that the Universe may have someone in mind who could bring even more light into your life!"  And just imagine how wonderful that will be!
Very emotional and heart-wrenching write.

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2002-11-25 05:23 PM


scorpio
Well done enjoyed the read.

garysgirl
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8 posted 2002-11-25 07:06 PM


Scorpio, I hope this is not about you. You
are such a sweet person. But, even it you
weren't, I'd still hate to see someone
"playing games" with another's heart. That's
very cruel.
If it is about you, dear friend, just try to
remember what Earth Angel and the others said....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
9 posted 2002-11-25 07:23 PM


Sometimes what seems to be intentional is simply a missed communication...Humans do that.  Smiles to you my friend...
ThisDiamond

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