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Without You
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Without You Without you to remind me to walk on I might not know how to sing hope’s song But if I look within I can recall the touch Of a love that spread its warmth of such Each day I’m learning to accept the fate I know love lives even past death’s gate Sobbing won’t hold time still for me So I’ll try to smile as I face time’s adversity Without your touch I wouldn’t have this A love that covered my soul in endless bliss I’ll never forget you made my eyes shine Or that we shared a golden moment in time How many souls can say they did so? That their hearts and souls in unison flow Time is the only regret I have about you The minutes together were much too few Without your voice will I still find my way? Will I find the path I should take every day? Are the choices I’ll make right or wrong? Will I still hear the music of love’s own song? I know I’ll go on and all will be well But the pain of this loss is too hard to tell Without you to take my hand it will be tough And I wonder my love if I’m strong enough Without you I fear the colours will fade My heart, my soul will live in sorrow’s shade Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh Marsha dear heart, this is so sad. I hope you are alright. Your words are very touching. I know that we are all stronger than we realize, and that the sun will rise again to-morrow. Be well. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words are so rich in color and texture Marsha. I always enjoy where you are coming from big hugssssssss M |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marsha~ A very sad look into your heart echoed within your words...Paul May you be comforted during this sad time by the memories that special person left behind. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Ah, very nice. Thank you. etoodog |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dearest Marsha, You keep those memories alive girl, they will last forever. Good thing you have them. You'll be in my thoughts sweet friend and know that my arm is around you  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ 'Without your touch I wouldn’t have this A love that covered my soul in endless bliss I’ll never forget you made my eyes shine Or that we shared a golden moment in time' Doesn't get much prettier than this, sweet lady~ Sending you a bouquet of Heart-Hugs~   Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha Bless you my dear you write so well and memories will help for a spell. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
I like this... beautiful |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i cant see for tears in my eyes! i felt your pain, your hope, and unconditional love. thanks, i enjoyed this so much Marsha. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Marsha, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope all is well as I send many angel hugs of comfort your way to ease the tears in your heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, love will always find a way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Marsha... I don't really know what to say about this absolutely lovely but very sad piece... But this much, I do know... Love does survive death and once you have loved someone and he has loved you... you will always have that love. ~ hugs and tearsLyra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I’ll never forget you made my eyes shine Or that we shared a golden moment in time How many souls can say they did so? That their hearts and souls in unison flow Time is the only regret I have about you The minutes together were much too few I'm sure you know what these particular lines mean to me... and what a rare gift it is when we can say this about a relationship. *S* It's hard to know whether to comment on the beauty of your poem or the pain that propels the words forth... both beauty and pain are abundantly evident. *S* |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha Your words are capable of warming the coldest of hearts. This was such a beautiful, moving piece from your loving heart. "Love is, above all the gift of oneself" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
In the sadness of loss there's a light that leads to pathways of new joy, just search...you'll find it. Hugs, Deb |
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