Open Poetry #23 |
A heartfelt rant by a dreamer |
GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
my soul is a candle in twilight. I am looking at my reflection. I see clouds of blue smiling upside-down frowning Two twirling, floating suns hide and refract hurling hurricanes in reverse. Proclaimation emancipation Binds the mightiest. Nature can Quill exquisite expositions gracefully while Undoing tight, innumerable shackles effortlessly. Her reflection lingers in superlative mirages, translated in shivers of chills, mystical measures For my soul alone. However the tone, (Inspiration to and fro) in pensive relapses I cannot deny the reality of an absolute Flame. A sense of plenary is necessary, as is the ineludible Velocity towards love and sublime Articulations in peace; Unspeakable. This singing is a refrain, though ineffable, attempted through time and Trust. Truth tragically propels arrows and shatters lack, smacking into this plaque proclaiming an (analogy) elaborate fallacy regarding the passionate moon and loving sun somehow Getting a divorce. ( hah) hence ... Love is Cosmic. The Clarity conscious amended Whatever severed discrepancies wedged between us, perceived as a subtle, indiscriminate intermission in our Communion. Therefore- I am. Far punier fears squashed god and Country, So maybe (yes) Love can overthrow The tyranny of An irrational rationality-labeled McDonaldization and set in motion A decree! : pointing to a rubric: To allow one’s self To be swallowed by reveries and moods In falling snow; Unsubdued elations when flowers bloom, or Overtures of crickets chirping in tandem; whereupon Divinity manifests. Abandon your fears! Follow the dare To live wholly! For we ARE blessed; our lives are conceived blissfully in Eternity. If only an elixir could be converted into verses to recede the tide of fallacies! Love, dearly and unconditional, is an Aura whereby assurance abounds limitless in fine moments by way of dreams that pool and segue seldom into eternal Faith. [This message has been edited by GOlDsparklESS (10-17-2002 09:25 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Thanks for enjoying this uhm abstract randomness~! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this is a well penned write about something you care very deeply about, my little angel. i am astounded by your use of words. big words here.. big thoughts, grand visions we have here.. yes. visions |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"To allow one’s self To be swallowed by reveries and moods In falling snow; Unsubdued elations when flowers bloom, or Overtures of crickets chirping in tandem; whereupon Divinity manifests." This just caught my attention, as it is snowing at this very moment, while I am suspended in reverie, and for some reason am hearing crickets chirping. |
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