Open Poetry #23 |
ills of man |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
The ill of man through time on earth Are boundaries that must grow in worth The little more that they must take Deprives us all, so sins to make |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What amazing wisdom in four short lines. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I must echo Kethry, Rick ... a wonderful wisdom-packed write in so few words. Very well done, much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kissed by the same sun Born of the same womb Death takes us all back Into the same tomb yet some deprive others While some are givers of love Much richer a life Wisdom in your lovely verse Liz |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, this is wonderful that you can get so much thought into such few words. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Kethry, thank you so much for your reply and complement. Dear Kit, nice to hear from you again, thanks for your kind reply, I am glad you enjoyed. Dear Liz, your reply is wonderful, thanks for sharing your thoughts. Ethel, the sharing is a pleasure with all my friends in passions, thank you for your reply. Sincerely Rick May you all stay well And of some thoughts then share and tell. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Rick, I like this, very profound thoughts. Sandra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Rick! You packed a lot into little poem! Enjoyed! Earth Angel |
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